Tuesday 13 December 2016

Last post


this is my best friends collage and also this is my last post for year six.

Thursday 8 December 2016

Egg experiment



Walt: Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment.


Tuesday 6 December 2016

Editing a parragraph

Read through the following paragraph. Identify what needs changing, replacing or adding so that the paragraph makes sense. Edit the paragraph in the second box so that it makes sense to the reader. There are two paragraphs exactly the same so your audience can see what you have changed.


Original
when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush

Change this paragraph
When it was our last day camping out in the Bush my friends and I discovered that there was a Bush that was really rare. The bush didn't have much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing! It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside, But it just looked like a stinky old Bush.


Monday 5 December 2016

homonyms



this is my Homonyms slide show and it is about the differences between to words and there meaning

lehi diet coke Experiement



This is an expereiment with coke and metose with team 4

lehi verbs



This is my verbs slide show about the right sentence for the right puctuers


Thursday 1 December 2016

lehi animation

lehi animation from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This is my animation about solids liquids and gases please in joy