Dictagloss

This term our topic is as i see it. Our team is focusing on comics. Comics are pitchers in small box's that tell us a story in sequential order some times there are words

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Lehi disappearinses

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word Something  strange was happening.One by one,  things were starting to disappear  first my mum then my dad and know my sister it was up to me to find the solution .

my score out of 10 is ? 5

Lehi's dictagloss

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father was yelling "how could you forget the food? "to which the mother replied it was a honest mistake. I'm shore someone will come and help us .

My score out of 14: 9

Lehi's awsome Narrative writing

Once upon a time  a boy named Potter went on a camping trip with his family. They traveled a long way to the camping site deep in the forest.It was suround by a lake and riddiled with spiders.

While Potter was gathering wood for the camp fire  he came across another family that had forgotten their food and supplies to survive in the wild.

Then potter asked them how they forgotten their food so they told potter how it happened. They began chatting away so they told him  that mum was half asleep and she had forgotten the food and when they got to the camping site they just remembered that they had forgotten their food.

So Potter asked if they needed any food so they suggested Potter gave some food to them.