Lehi's awsome Narrative writing

Once upon a time  a boy named Potter went on a camping trip with his family. They traveled a long way to the camping site deep in the forest.It was suround by a lake and riddiled with spiders.

While Potter was gathering wood for the camp fire  he came across another family that had forgotten their food and supplies to survive in the wild.

Then potter asked them how they forgotten their food so they told potter how it happened. They began chatting away so they told him  that mum was half asleep and she had forgotten the food and when they got to the camping site they just remembered that they had forgotten their food.

So Potter asked if they needed any food so they suggested Potter gave some food to them.