lehi tran brok down

On wednesday I was going on a trip to africa but when we were going to sleep the track blow up then everyone panicked except me I just grabbed a parachute And jumped of the tran all the way down to the deep blue seas And I found A old boat.  

Lehi egg friend race

On Wednesday the 21st of october my whole classroom drew faces on raw disgusting smelly eggs. I was shocked when I found out that we were having an egg friend race.  

Me and Simon were clumsy enough to crack our  eggs on the mat then my classroom went to the park to have races with their eggs, then me and Simon went to grab another egg from my teachers tray. I cracked my egg after I made it  across  the finish line and I was so happy that I came 6 and I didn't know what my friend simon came, then I saw a hole blob of egg yolk on the plank of wood, my teacher Mr Baxindine scraped it off with a hand full of bark then threw it on the yolk and wiped it of the plank.  then My classroom had to line up because it was starting to rain. My favorite part of the was when I cracked my egg friend.

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Lehi Mystery Word Quiz 2

Lehi Amazing Holiday

On thursday morning it was a sunny day. I woke up and thought to myself, hey I’m going to the museum with My Family today. It was the first week of the Holiday’s we were all psyched about going to the museum.

When I walked in the first thing we went to  was the maori room then I saw the Black beatles but they weren't that interesting so I went straight to the dinosaurs  

  

At the dinosaurs I saw a pterodactyl and I thought it was so amazing but then we went to see World war 2 And 3 weapons. We also Saw one of the planes from bake in the old days. The planes could only fit one person in it .And  Also I saw canons But my Most Favorite Thing About the museum. Was The disco room Because  there were Games from bake in the old days  that you can play for free.

After the museum  my family And me started to  leave the museum We went to the takeaway shop just down the road  we had fish berges And ice-cream From mcdonald's Then we went to the beach And played soccer kicks then my sister Jordin Dived in the Pond That looked like A pool.

So me and my brother Moroni jumped into the pond. Me and my brother Had races  in the water We also played ball tagey in the Freezing icy cold water with my colorful ball.

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