Last post

this is my best friends collage and also this is my last post for year six.

Egg experiment

Walt: Hypothesise what we think will happen during this experiment.

Editing a parragraph

Read through the following paragraph. Identify what needs changing, replacing or adding so that the paragraph makes sense. Edit the paragraph in the second box so that it makes sense to the reader. There are two paragraphs exactly the same so your audience can see what you have changed.

Original

when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush

Change this paragraph

When it was our last day camping out in the Bush my friends and I discovered that there was a Bush that was really rare. The bush didn't have much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing! It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside, But it just looked like a stinky old Bush.

homonyms

this is my Homonyms slide show and it is about the differences between to words and there meaning

lehi diet coke Experiement

This is an expereiment with coke and metose with team 4

lehi verbs

This is my verbs slide show about the right sentence for the right puctuers

lehi animation

lehi animation from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This is my animation about solids liquids and gases please in joy