This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
Tuesday, 13 December 2016
Thursday, 8 December 2016
Tuesday, 6 December 2016
Editing a parragraph
Read through the following paragraph. Identify what needs changing, replacing or adding so that the paragraph makes sense. Edit the paragraph in the second box so that it makes sense to the reader. There are two paragraphs exactly the same so your audience can see what you have changed.
Original
when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush
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Change this paragraph
When it was our last day camping out in the Bush my friends and I discovered that there was a Bush that was really rare. The bush didn't have much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing! It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside, But it just looked like a stinky old Bush.
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Monday, 5 December 2016
homonyms
this is my Homonyms slide show and it is about the differences between to words and there meaning
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lehi 2016 writing homonyms
lehi verbs
This is my verbs slide show about the right sentence for the right puctuers
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lehi verbs 2016 writing
Thursday, 1 December 2016
lehi animation
lehi animation from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
This is my animation about solids liquids and gases please in joy
This is my animation about solids liquids and gases please in joy
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lehi 2016 maths animation
Wednesday, 30 November 2016
camp bentson
Last week on Tuesday the 15th of November 2016 all the year 6s from pt england school went to camp bentson When we arrived i looked around and all i saw was a beautiful island called Kawau Island.
When we got to the island the first thing we had to do was unload the ferry. Once we had done that we went on our hike up the mountains. As I was walking up the hill my lungs were burning. When we stopped for a rest we were at a beach called smelcha bay with a little park. Some of us skimmed rocks and then we had lunch. After that we had to leave and head back to camp.
Once we got back from our hike we got to set up our cabins once we set up our cabins we got to have free time with some sports gear.
Then the next day we woke up at 6.00 clock in the morning and go for our morning run it wasn't like the hike it was much shorter and when we go back we were allowed to have a little free time. But then it was time for breakfast for breakfast we had cereale and hot food with milo. Once we finished breakfast we had to get ready for our first activity for the day.
My team's first activity was Kayaking. When we were out kayaking we got to go out so far I was starting to get scared. My arms were so sore of paddling. As we were paddling some of us saw stingrays. But they didn't attack us they just quietly passed us . When they passed through I was so happy that I got to see some stingrays But sadly we had to go back to the campsite.
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2016 camp bentson writing lehi
Tuesday, 22 November 2016
servey
Walt: gather, sort, and display data to answer questions.
We are learning to display data to answer questions that are given to me.
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lehi 2016 servey maths
Tuesday, 8 November 2016
Thursday, 3 November 2016
The bush
One Day a boy named Ash went out to the back of a bush to a lake to catch some fish for his family but well he was out fishing he was attacked by a crocodile that was resting by the river.
As soon as he saw the crocodile he took of into the bushes but when he was going into the bushes he saw something shiny like a crystal so he went into the bush when he was in the bush all he could see was mountains of bushes and water flowing down.
But for some reason the crocodile didn’t come in.
Well he was in the garden of bushes he felt something it felt like magic. So he decided he would stay till the next morning.
But something strange happened that night for some reason he felt like someone was watching him from a distance so he went closer to that person and closer until whatever was behind the bush jumped out and gave him a heart attacked he thought it might be a monster but it was just a bunny so he went back onto his bush bed and it was so cosy.
he quickly fell asleep and woke up the next morning and set of back to home but when he arrived at the bushes that led out they were burned down so he had no idea of how to get back to the other side somehow someone made it into the garden and found another way out if they could get out so could I so he searched the whole island but nothing no Exit until someone found him but this someone was his garand father somehow he must of found his way here a long time ago
And his garand father said i know a way out but i need someone strong enough to push it open like you sonnyboy' then what are we waiting for let's go.
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the bush 2016 writing test
Tuesday, 1 November 2016
Tuesday, 18 October 2016
Tuesday, 11 October 2016
Wednesday, 14 September 2016
Friday, 9 September 2016
Monday, 5 September 2016
Thursday, 25 August 2016
Wednesday, 24 August 2016
olympic sport in Rio
Did you know about fencing? It’s not when you put up fences around houses and buildings. fencing is an Olympic sport with a metal plastic swords. In the modern Olympics they had fencing as well as know. fencing is a game with two people each person wears a protective suit. In 1924 women were able to join and compete in fencing.
2:In fencing you never ever point at someone without a mask on because you might poke someone’s eye out. The rules are you have to hit the other person 12 times to be able to win.
Conclusion
The Olympic games are being held in Rio,Brazil this year and I hope that New Zealand wins most of this year's medals.
Tuesday, 16 August 2016
Friday, 12 August 2016
Thursday, 11 August 2016
Wednesday, 10 August 2016
dictagloss
Countries that host the Olympics must show they have the capacity. Space to hold the games and inviscid there own money into them throw the influx of tourist the hosting Countrie hop to gain more money dirging the Olympics ultimately the IOC diced the witch Countries hold them.
In 2012 the Olympics were held London United Kingdom it was the third time. London had hoisted games. The Olympic were held agin in 1980 and 1948.
In 2012 the Olympics were held London United Kingdom it was the third time. London had hoisted games. The Olympic were held agin in 1980 and 1948.
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dictagloss,
writing 2016
Monday, 8 August 2016
problem solving
Walt: solve word problems with decimals this is what we are learning about this week
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Lehi 2016 maths problem solving
Thursday, 4 August 2016
Ciny Limpics
Walt: Understand the author's point of view
Understand the Independence Games and who these games are catered for
this is what we are learning about this week
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Lehi 2016 reading Ciny Limpics
Wednesday, 3 August 2016
problem solving
Walt: subtract decimal numbers this is what we are learning this term
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Maths,
problem solving 2016
Tuesday, 2 August 2016
holiday Highlight
In the first week of the Holiday’s my Family and I spring cleaned the house and after that my Mum gave my Brother my Sister and I $50 dollars and took us to Sylvia park and we got whatever we want but my Brother and I didn't get anything all we got was hot dog and a smoothie after that my Sister Jordin wanted to go to Smiggles and buy stationery stuff well my Sister was in Smiggles my Brother and I went to toy world and looked at some nerf guns but we didn't get a nerf gun because they were too expensive so my Brother and I went back to my Mum and Dad when we got back we went home.
Friday, 29 July 2016
Olympic history
Hook: Do you know about the Ancient olympic Games? The Olympic Games began in 776 BC in Olympia. There was only one event and that was the 200 yard dash. It was only men that competed in the nude.The Olympics was a religious festival in honor of Zeus and they celebrate every four years.
In 391 AD Rome invaded Greece. Two years later Rome abolished the games.
In 1896 a French man re-started the Olympic games in Athens, Greece.four years later In 1936 first olympics television then it became world wide event. And the Frenchman formed a committee the international Olympic committee or ioc for short and it was made to protect the Olympics.
The Olympic games are being held in Rio Brazil 2016 and I hope that New Zealand win’s most of this year's event’s.
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Olympic history 2016 writing
Thursday, 28 July 2016
Thursday, 7 July 2016
lehi play reflection
This is my character his name is toby.he belongs in a family of four.of one sister one brother and a mum and dad this story is about three kid’s trying to order pizza from Gooble’N go the pizza takeaway but when thay try to order instead of just saying can i get a cheesy pizza it takes 30 minutes
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play reflection 2016 writing
lehi speech marks
As soon as Tim got his pocket money, he jumped on his bike and raced straight down to the shop. “How can I help you”? asked the shopkeeper.
Tim looked long and hard at all the ice-blocks and finally said, “I'd like a lemonade ice-block please”. “Here's your ice-block”. “That will be one dollar and fifty cents”, said the shopkeeper. Tim put his money on the counter and headed out the door calling, “Thanks very much, as he went.to unlock his bike
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lehi speech marks 2016 writing
lehi my real life hero
A hero is a person who protects those who cannot protect himself or herself. A hero is someone that saves people from ice berks people drawing or falling of a building and that is what a superhero is.
My everyday hero is my mum because she always takes care of me. Like the time when I broke my leg. My mum took me to the doctors and made sure everything was alright . Or when i’m in pain she puts sudocream on it and straps it up herself.
My mum is a hero because she always make sure that there is food on the table and in the cupboard.
That’s why my mum is my hero.
Tuesday, 5 July 2016
Friday, 1 July 2016
Monday, 27 June 2016
spaghetti
Walt: listen and remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph.
Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner. mm yum mum makes the beast meat balls in the world my sister remarked. I ate lots of spaghetti "ha-ha" I laughed as my brother spilt suause
My mark out of ten is five
Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner. mm yum mum makes the beast meat balls in the world my sister remarked. I ate lots of spaghetti "ha-ha" I laughed as my brother spilt suause
My mark out of ten is five
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2016 spaghetti dictagloss
Friday, 3 June 2016
problem solving
Walt: find a fraction of a numberWalt: order fractions with like denominators Walt: simplify fractions |
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2016 problem solving maths
Thursday, 2 June 2016
Tuesday, 31 May 2016
spider man
Peter Parker got bitten by a highly enhanced spiders. That gave him super powers that included ,strength ,agility, spider senses, scaling buildings , and spider webs that shot out of his rist.
Spider man wears a red and blue costume with a mask. To keep his identity a secret he also protects mankind. And with great power comes great responsibility.
Spider man wears a red and blue costume with a mask. To keep his identity a secret he also protects mankind. And with great power comes great responsibility.
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2016 writing spider man
Monday, 30 May 2016
Friday, 27 May 2016
Thursday, 26 May 2016
personification dictogloss
The moon danced a pone the ocean as if on a spot light at stage the tied old shoe feat lonesome at the back of the closet the cellphone alarm screamed and holed at me until I finely fold out of bed
I think I got 5 out of 10
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2016 writing dictogoss
Wednesday, 25 May 2016
Friday, 20 May 2016
Suzie and the space nut's, episode 4
docter Weevil is evil and he is cruel.
what I think is going to happen on Suzie and the space nut's episode 4. Is that Freeble and Gort capture docter Weevil and tack the spacship to Suzie's house. And then Freeble and gort take of in to th soler system.
what I think is going to happen on Suzie and the space nut's episode 4. Is that Freeble and Gort capture docter Weevil and tack the spacship to Suzie's house. And then Freeble and gort take of in to th soler system.
Wednesday, 18 May 2016
Images tell a story
Walt: Understand comic art
Infer hidden meanings/ Predict what could happen next in the story
these are some slides that show what the characters are saying and thinking
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2016 writing Images tell a story
Suzie and the space nut's
Freeble is funny he is serious and he’s not so bossy
In episode 2 of Suzie and the space nuts. Suzie and Freeble went to school and Freeble. Dressed up as a human and followed Suzie to school when Suzie saw Freeble she freaked out. And Freeble had to hand out the books but instead of handing them out he eat them.
I think what is going to happen in episode 3. Is that maybe a evil doctor took the spaceship to examined the alien technology and become the ruler of the world.
Friday, 13 May 2016
onomatopoeia
WALT: match sound words with pictures and pictures with sounds. I learnt that onomatopoeia means a sound and a word. |
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lehi 2016 writing onomatopeia
Wednesday, 11 May 2016
Dictagloss
This term our topic is as i see it. Our team is focusing on comics. Comics are pitchers in small box's that tell us a story in sequential order some times there are words
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dictagloss,
lehi 2016 writing
Monday, 9 May 2016
Suzie and the space nuts
Suzie lives with her parents and must have a brother name Billy, who gets into trouble for breaking things.
While Suzie was feeding her alien friends, Billy must have snucked out of bed and entered the spaceship without anyone looking. Then Billy started playing around with the controls and pushed the big colorful button that caused the spaceship to blast off into space with him in it before Suzie and her alien friends came back to the ship.
baking
Walt: Tell a story using pictures (comic strip) This year we are learning about comics so miss Lavakula's literacy is writing a story out of pictures. |
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2016 lehi Baking writing
Friday, 6 May 2016
lehi Holday highlight
In the first week of the Holiday me and my family went to the Sylvia park Hoyts at 3.o’clock. We watched Allegiant. My favorite part of the movie was when they made it to the Greenland. I got to pay for myself because I won a movie voucher from dojo points in Miss West’s maths class and Simon came second.
On the second week of the holiday I went to red rats and got new shoes and new clothes. After that we went to Mcdonalds and had ice cream. my Mum had the big boss burger and I had some of my mum’s burger. It was so delicious.
Monday, 2 May 2016
Friday, 15 April 2016
Fiafia 2016!!!
Fiafia 2016!!!
Fiafia is when we perform dances and items from other countries. We have fiafia every two years. Fiafia is all about having fun and showing other people what you can do.
There were 18 groups . My group for fiafia was Jump jam. we had to wear glow sticks and glow in the dark face paint but it didn't really glow in the dark. We also wore black clothes.
Also the jump jam was after the little maori group. My favourite item was the Tongan warriors because there item had a cool song and a matching dance. And next time we have fiafia I want to be in the circus circus.
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Fiafia 2016!!! lehi writing
Thursday, 7 April 2016
Friday, 1 April 2016
lehi amazing camp writing
This is some writing about the year 5 and 6 camp injoy
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lehi 2016 amazing camp writing
Wednesday, 30 March 2016
week 6 maths
WALT: use multiplication facts we know to solve larger multiplication problems by rounding and compensating
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lehi week 6 maths 2016
where am I at
Walt: demonstrate our knowledge so far of addition and subtraction
this week we have been learn to add and subtract numbers from 2,5,and 10
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2016 lehi where am I at
Monday, 14 March 2016
Lehi Captain Morgan Adams
Captain Morgan Adams was a tyrant a pirate bent on causing mayhem and havoc. Across the seven sea but also an enemy of the british empire.Along with his crew they had boarded smaller ships and taken there butty for safe keeping. This all changed when they came across the cursed treasure of Davey Jones locker.
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Lehi Captain Morgan Adams 2016,
writing
Wednesday, 9 March 2016
lehi problem solving
WALT: use multiplication facts we know to solve larger multiplication problems by rounding and compensating.
This slide show shows some awesome ways to work out times tables.
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Lehi 2016 maths problem solving
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